I really enjoyed listening to you read your story. The octopus sounded strong and ferocious. Your voice was loud and clear. I think I could hear you smiling as you read the ending!
Dear Ben,
Great Story, Uncle Arthur and I listened to it three times and were sooooo proud of the way you read. The story was fun and I’m glad that those guys aren’t fighting in my ocean. Uncle Arthur loved the musical tags at the beginning and the end. It was nice to hear your voice and I could see the smile on your face when you said “and the octopus died”. Can’t wait to see you guys in Maine. Love Auntie Faith and Uncle Arthur
13 responses so far ↓
1
Ellyn
// May 11, 2006 at 3:05 pm
Great job Ben. We loved your story.
2
Betsy
// May 11, 2006 at 3:17 pm
Ben,
Terrific job with your story. Can you send us a copy?
3
Aunt Susan
// May 11, 2006 at 6:30 pm
Dear Ben,
I really enjoyed listening to you read your story. The octopus sounded strong and ferocious. Your voice was loud and clear. I think I could hear you smiling as you read the ending!
Thank you for sharing it with us.
4
olivia henriques
// May 14, 2006 at 10:59 am
wow Ben nice job! You sounded like a professional. I could listen to it over and over, it was so good and clear.
-Olivia H.
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olivia henriques
// May 14, 2006 at 11:00 am
wow Ben nice job! You sounded like a professional. I could listen to it over and over, it was so good and clear.
-Olivia
6
Will
// May 14, 2006 at 11:04 am
Dear Ben,
Nice Job!!! I thought your story was awesome! I would love a copy. I hope there are more stories coming. Keep it up!
-Will
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Anna and Hailey
// May 14, 2006 at 3:36 pm
We thought the story was great but a little sad. Maybe the sequel will have the octopus and plankton being friends. We love you Ben. Anna and Hailey
8
Jay
// May 14, 2006 at 7:58 pm
Ben, I loved it so much. It was so good. I wrote a story once maybe I can read it to you. My story was not as good as your story.
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Eli
// May 14, 2006 at 8:00 pm
Dear Ben,
I loved your story. You will have to send me a copy so I can hang it in my room. I hope that you can write a sequel to your story.
Love,
Eli
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Sarah
// May 14, 2006 at 8:01 pm
Ben,
I really liked your story. I thought it was interesting to listen to. You did a great job reading it.
Love,
Sarah
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Ben
// May 14, 2006 at 8:02 pm
Ben,
My favorite part of the story was hearing you read. I felt that you were sitting here with me. You used great vocabulary !
Love,
Aunt Stephanie
12
Brett
// May 15, 2006 at 9:39 am
Benny Boy– great story. It was so good I had to listen to it several times. Love, Dad
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Faith and Arthur
// May 15, 2006 at 11:14 am
Dear Ben,
Great Story, Uncle Arthur and I listened to it three times and were sooooo proud of the way you read. The story was fun and I’m glad that those guys aren’t fighting in my ocean. Uncle Arthur loved the musical tags at the beginning and the end. It was nice to hear your voice and I could see the smile on your face when you said “and the octopus died”. Can’t wait to see you guys in Maine. Love Auntie Faith and Uncle Arthur