Nathan’s Story

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1 Ann // May 11, 2006 at 11:57 am

What an exciting story! You read it with great expression, too. I would love to read one of your stories about dogs someday, because you write very well and dogs and stories are two of my favorite things!
2 Jennifer // May 11, 2006 at 1:26 pm

Dear Nathan,

What a story! I think I enjoyed learning about you on your “About the Author” page as much as I did listening to you read your story. I think you are lucky to have a brother and a sister, and also lucky that you like to read and to write because you write a good story. I look forward to listening to more of them.

Jennifer
3 Kevin // May 12, 2006 at 7:45 pm

Dear Nathan,
I like the part when the snake was chasing the spy. It was a really funny story.
From your friend,
Kevin
4 Jonathan // May 16, 2006 at 10:57 pm

I liked that you got the idea of the jungle coaster from going to Legoland and it was funny that the wind made it so the snake couldn’t see.

1-Huckleberry